Seeing as I am writing my blogs a little late, I had to go back and figure out which paper was the evualative summary. Now that i've found it, I remember.
I had a lot of opinion in this paper. Once you were finished reading it, there was no definitley no doubt which side I had chosen. I didn't really use the as, we, are words very much. I think that's a good thing. Overall I feel like my paper was pretty well written. I think it flowed nicely, but it was a little short. If I lengthened it up a little it would probably be better.
I think the biggest issue I had with this paper was giving my opinion without shoving it down the readers throat. I have very strong feelings on obesity from fast food, my thoughts being that it is completely the consumers fault. So when I write a paper evaluating a man who says its the business's fault, I get a little... heated :) But in the end, I think I did a decent job of keeping it fair.
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